I don't have a problem with minor typos and more obscure grammatical errors, but you should always use capital letters at the beginning of a sentence,...for proper nouns, and the word "I". Try not to use tense shifting, it's one of my pet peeves. Tense shifting is when you start a chapter in one tense and suddenly shift to another at a random point for no reason. As a general rule, this story is in present tense, unless you are using a flashback.Keep in mind that this story should be in second. “When I came out of the shower, she was just standing there gawking at me.” Richard confessed later when we were in bed.I loved him for telling me about the incident, but I didn’t want to let him know she’d already told me about it, “She’s your sister. I’m sure she’s seen you naked before.”“Uh, no. That has never happened. She was ... very young. By the time she reached puberty, I was already gone.”I still played dumb, “Well, I’m sure she’s seen plenty of naked men. I doubt it will scar her for. More

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